Final Draft Plans

Planning to work on the research paper. The areas I have to work on 1. Citing 2.Get sufficient information and 3.Using more quotations

Research paper feedback

The author stated her side clearly and used good examples to justify her argument. Those are things i would like to do in my paper as well. The grammar wasnt as good as it could have been which is one thing i would try and make sure is good in mine.

Sharing A Source

The most important source for my topic is "Cell phone use as bad as drunk driving" by Jeffrey Silva from the RCR wireless news. It basically says that driving while talking on your cell phone is as dangerous as driving under the influence.They are as impared as people driving drunk. I found this source on LexisNexis and it is important to my topic because im talking about how it is bad to multitask while driving.

essay 2

Im still not sure what I want to write on. Im leaning toward the science and technology: promise or peril topic and portraying minds but i think im going with the science and technology.

research paper 1

Not decided on topic yet :(

essay #1 Temple Grandin

I agree with Temple Grandin when she says "Human beings do not really need emotions to connect with other human beings or animals or to behave morally with a sense of right or wrong". She has successfully overcome all the obstacles that people with autism face and is leading a very "normal" life.